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So they say I'm crazy
Published on March 13, 2007 By Sugar High Elf In Fiction Writing
Long? I haven’t been here long. No, not long. I have been here forever. I don’t keep up with the nights, the days, the meals, the sleep. I don’t keep count. Not anymore. I used to keep count, but I was afraid it would turn me crazy.
Crazy? That’s why they say I’m here. I don’t know what I have, but they say I have it. I don’t agree, but they don’t mind. They bring me in, they sit me down. They watch me, always. I sleep, I eat, I hide the pills. I won’t take the pills.
Pills. Always pills. They have so many, blue, green, white and red. I don’t get the little pink pill, and I am glad. I wouldn’t take it anyway. I never take the pills. That’s the one thing they can’t make me do, no matter what they tell my husband
Husband? Yes I have a husband. Hard to believe, isn’t it. I know it is. I forget him sometimes. I forget him because he has forgotten me. He only sees what they tell him I am. He forgets that I was once his fiery woman.
Woman born. I wonder sometimes if that is my crime. Why they put me here, for being woman. I didn’t like their game and I didn’t like their rules. We were supposed to be equal, supposed to work together. That was before the children.
Children always under foot. Why do I have to stay with the children, always. I wanted to write, but they took my pen. I’m sure they didn’t mean to take it, but away it has gone. He knew he was taking it, but take it he did. Away the paper, away the pen.
Pen and paper, gone away, gone below. He hid it from me, I wonder where. Is that why I’m crazy, because I crave them so? Because I prefer to write than tend the little one in the crib? Because the cake never turns out as well as tale?
Tales are tall, but not lies all. My dream was only to write. I married for love, but the ring became a chain. And endless rope that kept me bound, that kept the pen from hand. I reached, I stretched, but the chain was short, not long.
Long? I haven’t been here long. No, not long. I have been here forever.

Comments
on Mar 13, 2007
Wow! SHE this is so good! I love the way you weave this tale. Girl you do have the gift of the pen! And you know what? This does tie in to the last fiction piece you did, even if it wasn't meant to be! I enjoyed reading it!
on Mar 13, 2007
This does tie in to the last fiction piece you did, even if it wasn't meant to be!


I blame it on the feminist literary criticism I'm reading right now.

And thanks. I almost didn't put this one up because I wasn't sure how it would read.
on Mar 14, 2007
I was going to say the same. This is a great tie-in with The Zombie piece you did recently. I really like the way you duplicated the last word of the paragraph to the first of the next. This could be a poem as opposed to a piece of prose.
on Mar 14, 2007

I kept seeing Angelina Jolie in "Girl Interrupted" saying this.

Very manic.

Good read.

on Mar 14, 2007
Make that 3.  I saw the connection.  This is the prequel.
on Mar 14, 2007
I was trying to think what the woman from Charlotte Perkins Gilman's "The Yellow Wallpaper" would be like after the story.

This could be a poem as opposed to a piece of prose.


I was actually inspired by a poetical form called the sestina. The only part of the form that I kept was that the last word in the last line has to be the first word of the next.
on Mar 14, 2007
I thought this was great.

I couldn't picture the characters but it was dark and cold in every room I saw while reading.
on Mar 17, 2007
word in the last line has to be the first word of the next.

- enjoyed that part - it made it flow

- I also liked the theme - my take: the cost of intimacy is risk of loss of self