JUWC - Haiku - lonely

Published on June 9, 2007 By Sugar High Elf In Writing

Trapped in my own room
No one to see or to speak
loneliness my friend

Comments

on Jun 10, 2007

Ah, this oozes melancholy.

Don't some aspects of moving suck? I wrote one of my most solitary songs right after moving one time.

I liked it a lot.

Sugar High Elf

on Jun 10, 2007

It oozes something... but I'm not sure I'd call it melancholy. Wallowing self-pity is more like it.

InBloom

on Jun 10, 2007

Nice haiku...too bad it's coming from you feeling down.

Sugar High Elf

on Jun 10, 2007

It's better than the haikus my old poetry class used to come up with. Our teacher let us write them on Halloween... each person wrote one line, then passed it on for the next person to write a line and so on and so on. There were all creepy, but that was fine since it was Halloween. We did the same thing for Thanksgiving and Christmas... but they all turned out creepy too. People exploding from eating too much turkey, and Santa did some very naughty and evil things.

Ahh, good times.

LadyCleve

on Jun 10, 2007

People exploding from eating too much turkey, and Santa did some very naughty and evil things.

I can imagine how much fun they were to read after you were done!

dynamaso

on Jun 11, 2007

I thought this was sad. Hope you find a cure for your loneliness soon.

uDigItTheMost

on Jun 11, 2007

Sometimes loneliness can be a friend but I don't know if it is when you're trapped.
Hope you are doing better.

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